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Re: Secrets
Hello! I liked this song. What is instrument for playing this song? There are very beautiful words. I think, that it is touching. Right choice of words makes to feel ...
Feb 5, 2010 -
Re: Ruined
Hi! I think, that it will be very beautiful song. It also express feelings very well. I think, that this song will be close for people. Many people went through ...
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: Whatever it Takes
Hello! :) I like this lyric. This song will be actual for many persons. Many persons know, how it feels, when you love somebody, and you don't know, what person, ...
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: where great tigers roam
Hello! I like this poem. At first, there is a good rhyme and rythm. And this poem has meaning. Most of people want to go to some place without pain, ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Twilight
I've just read the first part of ''Twilight'' and watched the film. I know, why did this book became so popular. It has story, which is not ordinary, interesting. It ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Racism.
Hello! This poem makes reader think about the problem of racism (which is very widespread problems in the world). I think, that it is also very important problem for you. ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: David, not Dad.
Hi! :) You wrote great song. There is a rhyme, there is a meaning. You express feelings of the lyrical character very well! Especially I liked chorus. :) I want ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: I Will Worship You
This words are positive! They can wake up somebody from sadness. Oh, it would be great, if people would love the God as your lyrical character does. You wrote song, ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: The Ballad
I think, it is song with meaning. It has idea. I like ballads, because it is especially interesting to listen words and music (sometimes there are some songs without meaning ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Into the Citrus Trees
It is a great poem!!! I like it at all. Beautiful words, images. It doesn't resemble other poems and songs about love. Sometimes, when I read poems of my friends ...
May 17, 2009 -
Re: .
It is a good poem about existing problem. It made me feel all feelings of main character, for whom street became her home. I thought, that such people as that ...
May 17, 2009 -
Re: Like Broken Glass
Hello! I think that beginning of the story done very good. It helps to imagine the atmosphere, makes reader interested in your story. I think, that if you said about ...
May 12, 2009 -
Re: Pressure
Hello! This song shows known for all of us state, when it seems, that ''life is running, running out of luck''. Many people went through this feelings. This song also ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: The Angel's Lullaby
Oh, I see, that you are talented. :) It is the second your song, which I read. It will be sad song, but beautiful, I think. It is good song ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: -Deleted-
Hello, Megan! People have already said all about punctuation. I want to say, that I like your poem. It made me think. It is poem with rhyme and rhythm. And ...
May 8, 2009
